GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP:
ok...the breakdown
Spul:
Your flow was on..your punches were decent..but I would like to see more wordplay in this..
Flow 6
Rhyme 7
Punches 7
Kingz:
I personally loved your flow..your punches were set up nice, but they didn't hit as hard as they should have.
Flow 7
RHymes 7
Punches 6
Triple N
Your wordplay is on point. But, one or two punches were played "gas tank refill" Also, the "tryna be black" line is a NO-NO.....
Flow 7
Rhyme 7
Punches 7
Elo:
Your verse was well written...u had prolly the best vocab out the bunch...but, the spelling of the name is gay and played.
Flow 6
RHyme 7
Punches 7
Totals:
Spul/Kin: 40 outta 60
Tripl/Elo: 41 outta 60
close one...but
Vote: Triple and Elo...more complexity in their verses...i.e., better wordplay/vocab
HOLLA
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