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Old 05-11-04, 01:57 AM   #11
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ok...the breakdown

Spul:

Your flow was on..your punches were decent..but I would like to see more wordplay in this..

Flow 6
Rhyme 7
Punches 7


Kingz:

I personally loved your flow..your punches were set up nice, but they didn't hit as hard as they should have.

Flow 7
RHymes 7
Punches 6


Triple N

Your wordplay is on point. But, one or two punches were played "gas tank refill" Also, the "tryna be black" line is a NO-NO.....

Flow 7
Rhyme 7
Punches 7

Elo:

Your verse was well written...u had prolly the best vocab out the bunch...but, the spelling of the name is gay and played.

Flow 6
RHyme 7
Punches 7

Totals:

Spul/Kin: 40 outta 60

Tripl/Elo: 41 outta 60


close one...but

Vote: Triple and Elo...more complexity in their verses...i.e., better wordplay/vocab


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