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Old 05-11-04, 03:02 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by DFrost
aight ta break it down
ya both sucked, ta be honest, shadow edge got a good point even if his vote probly gonna get taken off, my rapper gotta eat though, i just made him and he already bout ta die, aint even battled nobody that shits fucked up

anyway valor u suck, damn, if my rapper wasn't starving to death...
yo im battling this herb named denver max......
this fool's 0-5 and hes wack its a fact........
right there, the opener, supposed to be one of your strongest lines i lost intrest, it sucked, u suck, but i already read the other guy so i read yours too
no creativity, throwin a few names in dont make a verse good, n just cause he completly unaware of the terminology of the times dont make you any less bad, you shouldn't have even said that shit cause gettin merked by someone who don't know what merked means is just bad for business

denver max- aight ur shit was funny at least, i read it almost willingly, and u won the coin flip, structure could use a little work but it ain't stretched and horrible like the other guys, ur closer was weak opener aight, u had some alright concepts in yours at least

vote- denver max

yes this guy took the words right out of my mouth and broke it down
Denver Max got this
Valor you need to elevate
pz
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