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Alright untitled, you had some nice punches but structure helps you hit harder. If you have a crisp line it adds the impact of it. Otherthan that you wrote an okay vote nothign over the top hot.
Flow: 5/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals: 3/10
Metas: 3/10
Multies: 3/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Overall: 23/60

Tony

This was a pretty hot verse, you had consistent punches and a few really good ones. The opener was a nice one and you had solid punches all the way through. One suggestion maybe throw one more bar in it read kinda short, and the begginer was a bit weaker than the end but nice drop.

Flow: 6/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 36/60
Vote: Tony