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Old 05-11-04, 04:09 AM   #29
DFrost
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Posts: 157
From: NY
aight

IP:

aight it was close but strini 'whatever the fuck the rest of your crazy ass fuckin name is' ya spit a multi driven verse and threw a lil too much vocab in it that didnt fit well but it was aight, ya had some nice wordplay and some solid shit i had ta think about, was gonna vote against you till i read it again, cause kryo voted for ya n i didnt seem why n he seems ta be ma favorite voter tonight cuz i'm FUCKED UP, but i read it till i under stood it n shit like this stood out
BAD-whose this Jay-walking, gay-talking, limp-flow-spitting-puerile blimp
even if it was your first name...ya still won't be called "pimp"
-After Ive skimmed your epistle I will surely crave a prozac
GOOD-quick to drop lyrics that you've soldered and hacked...
irrelevant shit goes back to 8-tracks and MJ black,
mack daddies, Tupac alive and furry kangol hats...//
shit couldn't keep me from sleeping if I was an insomniac
-and would only backtrack to read back if I have a fetish for crap//
opener n closer were nothin special

jay dogg- my bad yo u almost got another vote, u had punches u spit somewhere between an aight and solid level, no real creativity or wordplay that stood out though i liked how the other cat tried out mad shit n some of it worked for him, u spit a kinda generic style i wasnt feelin and the strini's grew on me after readin it a couple times so he got the vote

v. strini, it kinda sounds like a pasta or somethin... fetucinni? the bonifide noodle, someone should make a punch out of that, anyway i'm out