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Old 05-11-04, 09:44 AM   #9
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for cesus jhist:

flow:good job nothing too advance but it worked 7/10

volcab:better then average you seemed to put some effort into this often overlooked aspect of a verse alright good 6/10

punches:some nice lines, nothing to strong best,"his ass is realy on fire!...but its because hes the bench warmer..." keep up on it 7/10

overall:20/30 solid verse no problems with it

breakdown for lyikal:

flow:nice internal rhyming in the middle there too bad you didn't stick to it highlight of your verse 7/10

volcab:good job here you edged jhist out here 7/10

punches:this wasn't too much of a highlight you had a couple of lines but there were mainly played best,"checked em, You Couldnt Move Your Shit with a Spasming Rectum// " more of cause of the volcab and internal rhyming cause it's alittle played 5/10


overall:19/30 you had mechanics like flow and volcab down just need to work on them puches

vote--cesus jhist gets this just edged it out thanks to his punches
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