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Old 05-11-04, 02:56 PM   #15
Da Vinci
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RETURN THE FAVOUR OR I'LL NEVER VOTE ON ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR BATTLES!!! LOL!!! KID'N http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...874#post1279874


Rap'n master, your verse was alright, it lacked some really good punches, try getting more creative with them. There weren't really that many good personals either.
Snap your verse was all around better than his. Your opener was good as well as you closer, with some solid punches in the middle.
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 7/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 38/60

My vote goes to snap because of better punches that hit harder, your flow was kinda choppy though work on that.

Flow: 7/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 37/60
Vote: N sight
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