Alright Then!! lol.....

I Would Say You Fell A Little Short In Each Line' ..!! But It Was A Pretty Plain & Simple Poetic Scripture' ..!! I Wouldn't Really Classify Anything Is Wrong With It ....

the way she holds her head up high
neva towards the ground,but towards the sky
it might be the twinkle in her eye
or the juggle in her thigh
^Except The First' 4Lines' ... I Really Aint Feelin Them' .. But The Rest Looks Quite Over-Whelming (Jokes) .. Its "Safe" .. Nothing Great...!! Yet Wasn't .. Horibble

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