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Old 05-11-04, 06:20 PM   #12
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how old are u kid?....i bet u in 2nd grade and just learned how to read//
u rappin...... dont belong...its like nuns having sex... and smoking weed//

\^^ creative wordplay...decent opener


u on "needles and pins"....ill be very suprised if ur weak ass gets any wins//
ur rhymes are just trash...... and i threw them in the garbage - receptycle//
this bitch love evrything with testicle...hes the definition of rap-homosexual//


^^ dats nice punches there...good closer


rhymes 7
flow 6
punches 7

discharge, u sound like sumthin leaked out of a diseased dick,
your rhymes so corny they belong in a shitty teen flick,

^^ funny..but not sure how rhymes relate to a shitty teen flick

discharge, last nite i let your girl know hu the fuck was in charge,
u shud try it 2 i strongly recommend the facial dick massage,

man, im wreckin mc's like crash test dummies,
your rhymes are misleading like those fake breast hunnies,

^^ ur shit is fuynny...but they lack strong punches...if you can manage to retain that humor but throw stronger punches in the middle, you'd be unstoppable

but...this battle goes to DIS for having harder punches

that is what a battle is about


Vote: Dis