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Old 05-11-04, 06:40 PM   #18
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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OK N sight
you had a pretty solid verse
good punches good flow good structure
worstline:Who tha fuc eva heard of 'popa doc'..popa got sum nerve to bite vets..-
U a cross between 'Biggie' and 'Dre'?..nah, just a light speck
best line:Weren't u the kid PM'in me..talkin' fag shit 'bout your 'bi-ways'..-
I got more '5'0s behind me' than O.J. 'runnin' on the high-way'..-
Nigga, it's my way..or 'none' leavin' you holier than left edges..- (nun/notebook paper)
Cats don't 'read ur text for meaning'..jus 'look in my hand to see where ur head is'..
work on ur structure a lil bit aight?
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popadoc
bad structure fair punches none hit solid and bad overall verse
worsteline:ayo n sight your so blinde, you need to find the light before you can rap/
you keep saying you have talent, more like a comic like chris tarent/
*** terrible opener******
bestline:your a tradgedy who came out at birth unready, no brain just damn lame/
see this guy is scared when i rap, cause he's just lured into one big trap/
best line but it was LAME
work on evrything im out ~1~
my vote n sight
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