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Old 05-11-04, 07:31 PM   #19
Lyriclesolja
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Yo eric good spit its a solid rhyme but u do need to practice on some vocab. so pick up a dictionary so it can learn ya. Yo 20 you really need to work on flow you go from one subject to another to quick try to make it go to geather better.

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