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Old 05-11-04, 07:46 PM   #32
EyeDEA
Drop of Genius
 
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You Would'nt Be Able To Stop Me If Ya Rhymes Were A StopSign.|
Or Neither Would You Be Able To Put Holes Thru Me If You Had A Punch-Line.||(git it punchers leave holes....punchline think bout it)
Nice Opener i like the punchline Ryhme

Upset That He Messed With The Wrong Person And Touched The Wrong Nerve.|
Getting His Body Ripped Open With His Corpses Rotting Lets Just Sit And Observe.||
Nice punch not that personal though but ok

Only Time ToXiC-VerBz Can Beat Me Is Prolly When I Aint Got A Key-board.|
Time To Look At His Stats He Lost Once After THis Two Losses Goin On His Re-Cord.||
Nice shit i like the keyboard shit

Man,Why You Wanna Battle You Shouldve Stopped In Da Beggining.|
Every Bar I Spit I Leave Him *spinning* I AInt Even Started Yet And ALready Im *Winning.||
Nice but kinda big headed

Ready Or Not Toxic Cuz Im Here To Knock-Out Thats What Im About.|
Kid Let Me Win 5-0 So You Can Say Ya Work Is Sold-Out.
Ok punch nothin special though

Excuse Me Dawg Do You Wanna Be Excused.|
Dawg Next Time If We Battle Just Refused.||
Kinda weak punch but good enough i guess

Because Of Me There Gonna Be A New Meaning To The Word Owned.|
I'll Rip You Apart Then Shake Until You Stopped Like Gettin Post-poned.||
Nice Punch yo but not really that personal
Thinking YOu Still Gotta Chance Why DOnt You Think A-gain.|(pronounced A Gain)
Cuz After This Battle There Gonna Be A New Meaning To Head With No Brain.|
Nothing special

You Cant Beat Be If You Do Then Its A Glitch
Hell let Me Just Tell You That You Got Merked Bitch
Weak opener

u got some good potential at becoming better. u got some creativitie in ur flow and punches Overall I give you a 7/10