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Old 05-11-04, 08:00 PM   #14
e.coli
Can u beat me?..Hell No
 
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discharge got this battle

luminaz-your verse was too simplistic......it was not creative at all and your punches were really weak....u had no meta's or anything

dis-your lines are way to long shorten them up a bit........u had some good concepts just work on your wording a lil bit.......but u took this battle wit harder punches and metas