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Old 05-11-04, 08:06 PM   #10
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Checckity Checck Checck No Bullshit!!

Break Down For.. Triple N:



He dreams of being the next great rapper, doin' shows an vacationin' in cancun
Wake up! cuz fact is even if u " jerked off" ya rhymes u wouldn't be "coming soon"
^Nice Opener.. & Nice Punchline' ..!!!! 9/10

Your full shit, so stop fronting like those rhymes u drop u invented
You should change your rap name to " Enterprise" cuz all ya rhymes are " rented"
^Nice .... Bar Right There'.. Dropping Decent Lines 10/10 ..!!

Truth is you couldn't devise a hot rhyme in 100 yrs, so in waitin' I've become enate
Shit! if you gave your rhymes " Xenadrine" it still wouldn't be " less weight"(wait)
^And Once Again Nice Closer' ..!! Heated' .. 9/10


Checckit Checck Checck!!

BreakDown For Gambino:

for you its back to those front lines......with that little newbish verse.....
you beetin' gam? will never happen, like seeing hitler in a jewish church...
^Alright Opener' .. Wasnt Really Feelin It!! 8/10

the only time this kid will ever be hot.....is when I boyle my shit list.....
cause he'll have to fuck a queen with HIV.....to be ROYAL SICKNESS...
^First Line Was Fucked' ...!! But Nice On The Royal SiCc Part' 7/10

this bitch thinks he's elevated.....thinks he's gonna plunder the game...
but his punches are older than that man in the avatar under my name...
^Nice Punchline' .. 9/10 !!!

I wish i could of wrote more but had other battles so i'll give a simple 10.....
see your worse than a double negative guess thats why they call u tripleN...
^And' A Cool Closer .... Im Feelin It 10/10 -Best Line- Also "Fav" ..

But Triple Takes This Battle With Ezze' ..!! You Could Have Guessed That From All The Lines He Dropped.. Flow Was A Bit Off Structure Though' So Fucked Up Your Verse
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