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Old 05-11-04, 08:21 PM   #12
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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GAMBINO! nice drop
ur verse was short and sweet
you try to attack my style.....then ask quetions but lack awnsers...
yeah you'll win! as soon as the KKK shakes hands with the black panthers....
^^^ that was a lil bit played man^^^^
the only time this kid will ever be hot.....is when I boyle my shit list.....
cause he'll have to fuck a queen with HIV.....to be ROYAL SICKNESS...
^^^^^ i liked that^^^^^^^^
this bitch thinks he's elevated.....thinks he's gonna plunder the game...
but his punches are older than that man in the avatar under my name...
^^^^^^fair ^^^^^^^^^^
I wish i could of wrote more but had other battles so i'll give a simple 10.....
see your worse than a double negative guess thats why they call u tripleN...
^^^^not a great ender in my oppinion^^^^^^^^
overall *7.5*( try to add some multies it might help goosd drop)
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triple n
He dreams of being the next great rapper, doin' shows an vacationin' in cancun
Wake up! cuz fact is even if u " jerked off" ya rhymes u wouldn't be "coming soon"
^^^^^^^^ that was a fair punch but ur lines are kinda stretched^^^^^^^
You should change your rap name to " Enterprise" cuz all ya rhymes are " rented"
man beating your ass is easier than shaq lifting up a nesley crunch
Even if you titled your rhymes " Roy Jones Jr." u couldn't throw a decent punch
It's sad cuz ya spits really ain't shit, fuckin' eatin' up, they got sipped up
Cuz your rhymes are like " Gift Wrap" there only purpose is to get " ripped up"
^^^^^^^^^^^ i really liked that it was good^^^^^^^^^^^^
Truth is you couldn't devise a hot rhyme in 100 yrs, so in waitin' I've become enate
Shit! if you gave your rhymes " Xenadrine" it still wouldn't be " less weight"(wait)
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ good ender i think^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
u also need to work on multies and not stretch your lines so much
my vote triple n
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