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Old 05-11-04, 08:34 PM   #10
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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well there is no way that restricted didnt take this
gotta ass:
you were to basic to go up agaisnt some one as elevated as him
u need better structure
better flow
better punches
bestline: your opener
worstline:The Kid Is The Nicest, To Beat U Its Effortless/
Cmon Man Up, Ur Body Pumps Gallons Of Estrogen/
Dawg I Spit Rhymes From The Belly Of The Beast/
The Answer Isnt Can I Beat Ya Whole Crew, Its Who Lost By The Least/
work on all your stuiff and just elevate homie
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restricted
u took this easily
u had good punches
good flow
and i like that structure its tight
nice battle
betslines:Ya You Might Have Big Balls, But The Brain Is What U Lacking,
Need A Smack'N, Two Lyrical Punches, Got Your Dome Cracking/
and~~~~
I Know You From Jersey, BUt Damn Kid Your Style Is Mad Throwback,
Your Punches Thrown Wack, Listen To Me, Fuck This Site Just Dont Come Back/
goos shit good job to both
my vote
re$tricted
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