nice verse general but you didn't come harder. try to step your vocab and lyrics up. murderous nice rhyme scheme. i like the visual picture you painted. he could have beat you if his punches were better. that shit you wrote wasn't the best. step it up son. nice punches and structure. return the fava. :lyricalmethod vs. taken over

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