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Old 05-11-04, 10:21 PM   #2
E Looch
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ok break down real quick

gkillaz yo opener has hot killed it spellin out names i be doin it to so i felt that shit was real seriuos and your closer wasnt that good try not to say you concludin the battle like this ............. wasnt really fealin it and th rest of your verse was hit an miss with punchs some nicely worded some not good at all try workin on conistent punchs and you would be tough to beat

darrk lol ummmm dog elevate first off workin on your wordplay and creativite but umm your opener soundin like it was middle school rap battle seriuosly not very goos brah and your closer was decent not a good punch but had usefull multies decent wordplay but if you worded it better would have been pretty tight and the rest of your verse was the same to me just basic vocab and punchs nothin really stood out

vote gkillaz
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