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Old 05-12-04, 03:20 AM   #6
Shadows edge
retired.
 
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From: Urbana
IP:

You are cut. Even my rhyme scheme is more elevated than you. Check it:

Man…casual, illtalic, tek… kid looking for triple the fame
You just a wreck….
I won this battle from “Czech”… so victory foreign to this no-name
Kid can't touch my fucking crew. Catch-22... straight to the head
Shit's overdue....
This kid too afraid to drop a clue, ashamed of reveal the life he led
Such a herb even his profile dispersed... see he 40 and lack a wife...
Pain getting worse...
Kid take a look at your verse… only your ego is larger than life
And on the topic of size… his girl need all Adams ribs to construct her
This kid just realized…
And don’t feign surprise, that I’m even better at your whack structure
Listing your aliases is counting squares, so drop the rhyming n sit
Play the numbers, but beware...
Your careers a list of squares, which is why there's no prime in it


And if you guys don't understand something, especially the last line, don't vote. Or whatever... at least hopefully someone will get it.

Oh and someone vote on my battle with marv on EFL, it's 4-1 me...
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