Blackwell, this battle will leave ya carcass deformed/
spittin bars like they were punches, ya whole bodys sore//


^^ decent...coulda been worded better

you gon' be hittin boys, cos you can't hit up a bitch/
and the only way you'll be gettin your dick near a clit/

^^^ dats wack

torturous methods im gon' use to eradicate ya/
cryin n shit, as if your daddy jus raped ya/
your pathetic lifeform, im gon' blow up when i slay ya/
im mentally fucked up, and im gon decapitate ya//

^^^ dats sounds more like a freestyle than a battle verse...you're not really hittin him with the punches


lmfao bigneks?? u shouldnt be hangin wit g,s u should be hanging wit giraffes...take that name to a kid wit motor-neurone n even he'd fuking laugh... n even if u hung wit giraffes they'd just look at u n ask...do u always where that mask... or are u actually jim carey??... take out the knife n cut ya till ya skimmed n i aint talking bout "dairy"//

^^ That was hella FUNNY...the Giraffe part hits u real hard...but then the flow falls off and I don't know what you're talking about

that came out was "slobber"... I just ran all over u and i aint even a "jogger"... warm ya "insides" wit the 44 shells that'll "hide" inside ya ribs...it'll play hide n seak wit the surgeons n stain their blue "bibs"//

^^ maybe it's just me...but I don't get it...um..u have potential though

Vote: Big..more consistent flow..better structure

all need to work on punches tho

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