Punches: Jpoll took it... Graph, i wasnt really feelin any of your punches... they were kind of cliche-y, if you know what i mean. And Jpoll, most of yours were ok, werent too out there... like random... but didnt really hit that hard.

Flow:
I think Jpoll got this one as well... It was more solid, structure wise. Only fell off a few times, but graph's fell off a few more and his syllable count was usually a lil more or less than it should be.

Not much wordplay.

Jpoll gets my vote.

ADVICE:
both of you have got to work on harder hitting punches. Jpoll was sort of tryin to use personals with that spray thing in his opener, but yeah, get more personal and come up with shit people wont expect.

Your flows ok, ok but not too good. So go to cypher or sum shit and practice gettin your flow up to speed, since i lost my battle to gambino ive gotta revamp my flow cos it was fucked... so thats what im doin, and its already startin to come along. work on shit like Syll counts, and usin multis and all that shit. Increase your vocab by readin... anythin will do, but if u really desperate u can read the dictionary, this will get your metas goin and make your rhymes sound more sophisticated. And always, unless u seriously cant, try to make your all the rhymes in your verse more than one syllable, it will just go better....

DONT let that advice go to waste.. yo

elevate

Peace

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