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Old 05-12-04, 06:36 AM   #9
HELLonEARTH
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From: P-Ville
Exclamation Vote on dis battle

IP:

this guy repin tha black knights..../
those clowns battle like dykes...they pillow-fight/
Its an ok punch
this guy from scotland...north of tha border/
his accent sounds like he`s got a speech disorder/
HA HA good punch
ima spit raw to fuck up ya whole clan/
this guy cudnt battle if he bit tha wu-tang/
weak, very weak
my lyrical disease has one mission...to kill ya nervous system/
to deprive u of words...they call it malnutrition/
Aiight Aiight I'm feelin this
ma lyrics so quick outta ma head...cuming at u like a cypher/
bitch read carefully...theres sum big words u cant decypher/
This line was mediocre
im tha devil in this hell...n for you this is ya torture/
im a sadist mothafucka...so bite ma linez...i`ll torch-ya/(hell flames)
The devil thing is fuckin played
ima spit 16 linez of pure dope on this bitch/
so fuck it..go ahead n feed..coz i got u be-witched/
yead its aiight
if i woz u, i wudnt waste yer best shit in this battle...u got notin to gain/
bitch... i`ll have u gone in 60 seconnds...jus like "memphis reigns"/
Nice closing



why do da english think they grate/
its the country we all love to hate/
Eck, horrible opening
hers a long word for ya antidissastablishmantarinism/ (longest wrd in da dictionary)
say that with a mouth full of jism/
NO flow
we all know what the english like it/
all of them so full of shit/
Is this even considered a punch?
bet you chock when you get the mic/
just like in basketball ill hit ya with the sike/
this is your 3rd n final strike/
Eh this was pretty weak...
this mother fucker thinks hes bringin a storm/
but he aint even close to warm/
eh riiight
so now that the storm is over and done/
and just like william wallace ill make all ya all run/
only difference is im packin a gun/
Pretty good closer

aiight this is the point spread-
T-storm-7/10
Jay Dogg-4/10

Jay I've heard better stuff from you.
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