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Old 05-12-04, 06:59 AM   #7
t-storm
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this is tite so ima break it down....
jay dogg
structure-kept it simple but easy to read 7/10
personals-werent that hard but were personally aimed 7/10
punches-had lots but cudve hit harder-7/10
wordplay-rhymed very well but simple6/10
flow-simple n effective-7/10

supervillan
structure-gud but stretched 6/10
personals-sum attempted-but they were a bit off 6/10
punches-lots there but not 2 hard 7/10
wordplay-ok he had gud wordplay..more complicated words 8/10
flow-different to jays,but not more effective 7/10

overall woz really tite
ima give it 2 jay-coz he equalled supervillan wit less linez
n to say he woz in 3 battles at once he done gud