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Old 05-12-04, 07:27 AM   #8
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Originally Posted by FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
ghost took this battle wordplay and punches were sick opener was hott and closer was straight...structure was ok nothing really to it flow was good...overall good verse

best bar:have u tookin out the game just like james worthy
send shotz threw ya jersey that make u melt like a hershey

worst barr get left wraped in a rug an stuffed in the trunk of a skylark
u got riped apart like u waz covered in blood an fed to a shark

lil chucky i wasnt feelin ya verse your structure is different but i aint gonna hate on that but it wasnt as consistent as ghost's verse...u had some ok punches and decent wordplay and u got potential if u work on it....

best bar:This is my best, so i'll stop an lay to rest, cuz ya best put on a bullet-proof-vest. <<and that wasnt even a good bar but it was your best one

worst bar's:the whole entire rhyme elevate

vote:ghost354 overall he had a hotter verse and i felt it more than lil's verse


Agreed i think Ghost got this easily to be honest good battle
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