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Old 05-12-04, 12:39 PM   #9
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I’m calling Merk peter pan, cuz his punches Never Never land…/
This battle's goin down like black hawks on Iraqi land…/

^^ first line nice...second..blah..almost filler

I bet someone thinks ima loose this, but of course i'm flippin the spots…/
Honestly Merk the only way u could blow Heat is when ya foods hot…/
Aint contendin wit this, ur no veteran kid, quit pretendin that shit…/
I aint sure if Africa spreads aids or a myth…cuz Merk aint sick!…/

punches landed...but cud be harder...i think AIDS lines are played unless you come completely original


Ight.. heres the blind spit
Ayo, watch as I slit his neck to get to the core and rip his apple/
Ur crews all pigs And u just Represent "The Scrapple"/

not feelin the punch..and personally, i dun get it

Ight.. heres the blind spit
Ayo, watch as I slit his neck to get to the core and rip his apple/
Ur crews all pigs And u just Represent "The Scrapple"/

^^ da pretty coo

I merked u, go elevate cuz i feel bad i broke ur essense/
I sat this kid on Santa and he still couldnt demand "presents"/
^^ comman presence?..um...coulda been better


Vote: Lyrical Killak..his punches were more coherent...but u could up your wordplay 4 real


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