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Old 05-12-04, 12:40 PM   #22
EyeDEA
Drop of Genius
 
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$$upreme nice opener need improvemment
I'm predicting a K.o but we'll see how long this 'spar-lasts'~
So watch as i leave this kids "hood" smashed like a 'CAR-CRASH'//

Best line:
yeah i'm letting every 'bar-cram-ya'~
cuz it's obvious your a young buck tryna go pro but can't fill the 'LARGE-STANDARDS'~
$$upreme you flow is nice but you need to get more of a variety of your versus like different structure besides punch after punch getting kinda boring even though you got strong punches try to collaborate your skills and evolve more styles but you have improved deeply props given keep elevatin......overall 8.5/10

Gambino:
Didnt really see anything special or interesting in ur flowz the taco bell line was kinda cheezy and typical. and ur punches were kinda personal but they werent that strong nothing really wrong with ur structure just need to develop on ur punches and attacking the emcee to the heart and weak points iiight but keep elevatin nice battle just take it as experience....... overall i give you a 7/10

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