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Old 05-12-04, 01:17 PM   #13
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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dis was a okay battle kind of wun sided 2 me tho

opener-merk...killah ya first line was good then da second just fukked it up
structure-umm a tie
punchlines-merk hands down..killah aint have nun
creativity-merk
multis-nun
wordplay-merk had a little
personals-merk
enjoyed-merk....killah u got merked dunn lol i just dont like da way ay words ryhme u dont double ryhme so datz week 2 me plus ya punches was corny no hate just givin my opinion...merk nice verse some of ya shit was corny 2 but u got dis

my vote-merk

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1282552
^^^^link 2 my battle rite there return da favor ya'll..GON
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