that was pretty tight.

ya need to increase yo wordplay.

try by rhymin words that arent spelled da same.
for example gat and cat are to easy to rhyme wit

try sayin stuff like this
these rappaz will end up wit a shell on their back/
they'll have sexual intercourses wit my gat/
it just takes for you to talk shit just to get slapped/



use complex rhyme play and mix it wit excellent vocab.



peace