Ok

Dalyrcial...
your really basic ... go back to schoolin.... you gotta come with a better opener than that if you wanna win a battle you got good flow with some filler and you got good structure but you lack punches i thihk i see one persoanla and it isnt even good

Jsmoove...
ok you came a little more complex but i looked at your whole verse and all your lines could be worded better to hit him harder...and flow better... besides the fact you still worked him over with better punches... and the fella roc rhyme was pretty hot but sitll could have beeen worded better...

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