20 GraND: cool opening. You had bettter structure.

popa doc: you started off good by talking about his home town, but I think you could have made that better! I also had problems making it rhyme

20 GraND's rhymes flew better, as pimp said: doc needs to be more complex

Vote: 20 GraND

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