ima go wit white chron on this one good set up but you could still use better vocab. try to use more than two rhymin words and not to mention make it flow togeather!
and luke sad battle verse man you really need allaround practice!
and dont get pissed luke its constructive critisism!
peayce
ok i hit yall wit the truth now yall hit me up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123748