ok break down hos

paul pierce lol your opener was soft brah not even a really good punch had good flow but thats about it your closer was decent punch line was stretched and took alot away from it worded right that would have been pretty sick but it wasnt so.............. and the rest of your verse was pretty much the same to me all new concepts and everything but not really any solid punchs that i was fealin but nice drop regardless just work on wordplay and hard punchs

lyrical k1illah your opener was decent didnt really connect that well to me closer was weak to didnt feal that at all the set up line was tight but the punch didnt do nothin try usin another punch behind that line next time and the rest of your verse wasnt to hot i only liked the sac lunch punch thats what basically won the battle to me

vote lyrical k1illah

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