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IP:
damn hot battle.
COUNTRY:real hot verse.good flow,you need to work on structure a tad but it wasnt a major issue.good wordplay,um real hot.
best line:To battle me you'll have to pull out every word you know,
But after shit, bitch, and fuck, you got a blank line to show./
good line,simple wordplay,but real good.
worst line:Let me try my hand at Spanglish, Tu leave la musica alone hoy?
'Cause we know you ain't no True Thug- Enough said Homeboy./
weak ender.nothing to say.
work on:you need to work on some stronger more effective wordplay but apart from that everything was real hot.
overall:7/10.hot.
DELEON:real hot shit as well,verse not as hot as countree but a couple weak lines on his part might give you the upper hand.flow was good,structure:nothing to say,um wordplay was real good too.
best line:how you gonna beat me?...Bitch state your reason//
the only time Jay "Iller" than me....is during flu season//
good shit,funny and straight to the point.lol
worst line:none.i couldnt find one.
work on: hmmmm nothing really just punches this battle was missing some good punches.
overall:7.5/10.hot
FINAL VOTE: DELEON.he won by a half point.both those verses were hot shit.nothing else to say.countree keep up your good work youre real hot at battlin.deleon you good like always.
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