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Old 05-12-04, 11:43 PM   #12
DFrost
Flyweight
 
Posts: 157
From: NY
check it

IP:

discharge- structure was nice, aight opener aight closer, some solid punches, flowed nice, personals were good

mixxed- gotta watch out for selfglorification and filler cause you had a lot of it, even in your opener. bars were stretched bad structure and punches were overall weak. generic weak verse

vote goes to discharge