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Old 05-13-04, 03:02 AM   #26
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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god damn ill give feedback
ok ur bars r stretched and uneven as fuck ur flow was off a lil in resulkt of the structure
ur lines r played dont hit very hard but r ok
ur vocab could use a lil work but is ok
and im not hatin thats my opinion that u need elevation
ur not the best lk is better im better youngstar was better and i dont no who t lite is
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