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Old 05-13-04, 08:28 AM   #14
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It's obvious~*IM HOLDING UR ATTENTION LIKE A HOSTAGE*~BLACK and spreading blood with pleasure like *BONDAGE*~*OH U TRYING TO CATCH MY TALENT *UR FEET PICKING UP MILEAGE*~MY RHYMES MAKE CLAY AIKEN *STEP OUT OF THE CLOSET*//3 (YOU CAN"T STOP IT)

^^^ dat was a nice run...sick

i liked this piece...flow worked, even with long-ish lines

rhyming was coo...more internal would help

slick wordplay

this was a good drop

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