Occupation: Killin' dis katz? Must be a form of Spanglish,
Nigga I was just playin' about you not
speakin' da language/
the link added an effect but it wasnt a really good punch....6/10
To battle me you'll have to pull out every word you know,
But after shit, bitch, and fuck, you got a blank line to show./
Better....7/10
You might as well bend ova, 'cause you about to be fucked,
Musta hit your red button, you about to Lyrically Self-Destruct/
No really hard punch!....7/10
I always make Good on my M.C. hunting, so you can call me Will,
Wait till you choke on your bars, then you can claim Lyrically Ill./
Still waiting for a hard one....6/10
Let me try my hand at Spanglish, Tu leave la musica alone hoy?
'Cause we know you ain't no True Thug- Enough said Homeboy./
haha nice closer....8/10
Verse Score - 34/50 =
68%
Okay CJ...you didnt have direct hard hitting punches!!....need to work on ur meta's....they will add the eeffect u need.....flow was good...wordplay was good....decent verse....just werk on ur meta's and usin personals more...
CJ your not "Wack"....your just lyrically challenged//
sayin ya off tha "scale".....but your gettin kicked with my "New Balance"//
Good meta...nice punch...8/10
Screamin....DeLeon!!! ya runnin and duckin for cover//
tha only "Lethal Weapon" you got is the DVD with "Danny Glover"//
Nice punch....8/10
if wack rhymes was a crime.....Countree Jay would be on Death Row//
Chippendales the place he's gettin booked for a show//
Not feelin the punch...coulda gone places wit the first line....5/10
how you gonna beat me?...Bitch state your reason//
the only time Jay "Iller" than me....is during flu season//
Okay...7/10
Though you the man....after droppin that Beat//
On tha street...I'd leave ya face lookin like it was crab meat//
Bad...very bad....3/10
Yo Jay.....heard when ya not on tha net...your softer than a hostess//
Next time put more thought in your rhymes and snap the fuck outta hypnosis//
Decent closer....7/10
Verse Score - 38/60 =
63%
Aight...with your first couple bars i thought you were gonna take this...u started off with good meta's and punches....but than u fell off.....that crab meat line was horrible...it killed your verse....u woulda beeen betta off with out it....flow was off b/c of stretched lines.....wordplay was good....jus werk on sustaining the tempo and keeping good punches in ur verse...
Vote - CJ...more consistent verse....
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