View Single Post
Old 05-13-04, 09:17 AM   #22
CounTREE Jay
The New King Of New York
 
CounTREE Jay's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,135
From: Da Branch, N.Y.
IP:

Aight

Punches: Cesus. Closer and Air-o bar hit it, and Lyrical had the Jew line in last week's punchline contest, you should use fresh shit.
Flow: Cesus, his was much better structure, some of Lyrical's stretched
Multis: Lyrical, he had one in there
Personals: Cesus, he had one, didn't hit that hard, about the name applying, but Lyrical didn't have any, except the recycled Jew line
Vocab: About Even
Opener: Cesus, his was worded a lil' weird, but I wasn't feelin' Lyrical's at all
Closer: Cesus, decent personal on Lyrical's name

Fav Bars

Cesus:

Hes got a bow of rhymes unequipped...the bone without the marrow
so we did a circle in my plane...and it was his only air-o...

Interestin' and original

Lyrical:

Watch me draw lines round this bastard, slip n' snap necks//
This kid Needs to Buy World War Recounts to receive Veteran Text//

Thought that line was fuckin' sick.

Cesus won more of the categories, so Ima give it to him though.

Vote/ Cesus
Send a message via AIM to CounTREE Jay Send a message via Yahoo to CounTREE Jay