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Old 05-13-04, 10:46 AM   #6
JSmoove
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Posts: 87
From: Texas
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Maku--
You opened nice by "teachin' all to spit frees" I was wit u 4 the first 6 lines (u dropped 2 punches and a filler, but enuf to finish lil chi)...u lost me for 4 lines...and you had a decent close.

Lil Chi--it was your first battle, so elevate. you had some decent jabs, and your structre was nice...what u wus sayin' is just simple.

Both of yous---evrybody here in rapbattle have their own way to critique, and jus because u don't win a battle don't mean ur style isn't hot. jus elevate and make 4 damn sure there is no doubt the shit you spit is it.

Vote: Maku