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Old 05-13-04, 11:28 AM   #10
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From: London, me dun tell ya!!!
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(Round of applause) I can't believe I'm doing this, but this battle was quite alright!!

"Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/" - wasn't sure I was gonna like this line, but in the end I did - finished it well.

"And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/" - this is just a good line

"And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin" - all good solid rhyming, good continuity, I like it.
Shoot, I even thought the 'Everybody Loves Raymond' references were funny!!!

T-Storm
"ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/" - liked this, man. Good put-downs & wordplay
"u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew." - A good finish, no doubt.

there were other good lines in there too, like the convex, concave/str8 played line.

However, only 1 person can get the vote, so mine goes to..
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Mad Dog! (Dang! Either Mad Dog has spat a good verse, or I'm drinking whiskey on an empty stomach again.... ain't no whiskey bottle around here, so it musta beena good rhyme! Props when and where they're due.)

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