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Old 05-13-04, 01:04 PM   #12
t-storm
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i be more INSANE than that CLOWN POSSE
and i'm 16 and my raps give you sweat scare dreams
SOUNDS LIKE YA TALKIN 2 EM 4/10
you'll be fucked if you walk thru da street of queens
cauze i'll spread ya brains all over you'll be PLEASE, LET ME LIVE IN PEACE
BETA BUT STILL WEAK 5/10
this is halftime so give yourself a break cauze you next
it's like i scored 16 runs and you only got one pitcher left
THIS IS BETA AT LEAST ITS A PUNCH 7/10
you ain't crazy, you weak
give yourself a week of rehab just cauze you waz fuckin wit me
AWFUL-3/10
i mudered you and that's it
ain't no need to spit back cauze than that'll make no sense.
THIS DNT MAKE SENSE 3/10

U NEED A LOT HARDER PUNCHES n u had no personals
u need ur verses 2 rhyme
tryin keep ur verses the same length
if u can think shit up like that pitcher line ull elevate
gud luk..............

INSANE 16
this kids a rookie even though his shyt says flyweight/
smash this fagget like potatoes he still couldnt fill my-plate/
FUNNY...8/10
at the firts site of me ima cause ur pupils to diolate/
wit twin glocks ima make u feel the freeze/
OK cuda cum harder 7/10
weaken ya knees what the fuk was u thinkin messin wit me/
u wouldnt do shyt even if i pushed rock on the conner of ur block/
ALRIGHT-again b more personal 7/10
lil bitch so ima use bullets as a replacement for ur cock/
you called for 10 bars dumbass its ten lines/
NICE DISS-7/10
But it would be a waste of brain for me to give ya a piece of my mind/
if tupac jacked off on this bitches head he still couldnt get his head to stick to dem rhymes/
HAHA-i like this-8/10

ok sure u can see who won,insane 16-jus bring it a bit more personal n hard...other than that woz good

infamous....u need 2 step up everything...elevate.....seriously that woz weak