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MC.Cm: descent flow...structure was hard to follow at times. You had some nice punches, but no real connection from one line to another. For instance, you said "yo pimp rawb i'll have you studderin at the end of this spit...or even worse have your whole family sucking my dick." Sorry, I didn't get that connection, and that's simple. Actually, that's played...u put no thought into that. I was still feelin your intentions. Next time use more personals with a little more thought
Pimp Rawb:
Nice opener...good intro in using the opponents name to add credibility to your spit. that was hott. you used alot of fillers (next time use more personals), and that "gingerbread man" line was just weak. But I found your flow easier to follow and it looks like you put some thought into the opener and closer.
Vote: Pimp Rawb
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