well um work on ur structure a bit..and i lost ur flow mid way through..you had no multie's...come harder ya know..lol u talked about a lot of dick sucking..put more substance into it cha know..but it was nice for a first drop yo keep elevating *one*

SpokenBluntly

p.s. (and don't ever say ur "only a girl"...girls can rip shit to ma..keep ya head up)!

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