ok nice but easy win 2 killa he murdered dawg heres y

more creativity more punches betta flow and betta verse

dawg-add sum punches make sum ppl laugh and better worplay add more words in line but dont stretch it eitha

bestline-Bitch you call yoself lyrical killa but you aint a killa
Maybe you a killa but a killa of newbie Dealas

not 2 good but betsline

worsteline-alot

overall verse gets a 7/10

killa

bestline-Dawg say you can beat me? well I say you’re a bitch that lies.../
Everyone knows Im gunna crush TV like pissed fat guys* …/

beat him wit dat

winner-killa

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