mike:
good wordplay but ur lines didnt really rhyme kinda wack man
keep elevating work on better punches and metas and structure

worstline:the internet copy and paste, so site that before you write back
It’s a “Given” I hit him wit danger rhythms, don’t get caught for plagiar-ism
Lyrical Method, stuck on his own “procedure”
^^^ just a tiny bit wack
keep workin
best line:You must be on the can the way you spit
Cause you “drop” lines like a pile a-shit
use better vocab and make thosew punches stronger
overall *6*
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lyrical
nice verse good opunches but u need to also step up
worst line:your light don't shine, your mom is crying
cuz you ready catcha lost and i ain't even trying
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theres alot more man some of ur shit was wack work on ya structure aight
overall *6*
ur shit didnt rhyme good either i give it to him just cuz ur bad structure thats what lost is for u
my vote mik12
peace

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