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Old 05-13-04, 07:33 PM   #13
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check It..

I Read Both Verses, Jay Your Structure Was OFf, But You Came With A Lot OF Personals, But YOu Need To Word Your Shit Better. I Mean You Had Punches In All, But YOu Need Sum Style To Your Shit. Add Sum Nice Metas and Mulits.

Native Came Hot, His Verse Was Mad Hot, With Ill and Cancer Zodiac Sign, and The Frankstein nuts in your neck LMAO...I Loved Those Lines..Straight Up..Nice Drop Kid, Been Waiting For Sumthing Like Dat.

Good Drops To Both, Stay Dope You Two.

Vote - Native

HIT UP CHAMPIONSHIP BATTLE

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