CHO YOU DID VERY GOOD. FOR A NEWBE YOU SHOWED MATURENESS. IT THAT EVEN A WORD? ANYWAY NICE WORKPLAY AND STRUCTURE. YOU PUNCHES NEE D ALIL WORK BUT ALL IN ALL NICE VERSE. FINE MIND I EXPECTED TO SEE MORE OUT OF YOU. STEP IT UP SON.RETURN THA FAVA:
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