LOCKZ YOU KILLED THIS DUDE. NICE VERSE. NICE WORDPLAY, PUNCH LINES AND STRUCTURE. THE ENDIGN WAS CONFUSING BUT OVERALL YOUR VERSE WAS VERY GOOD. DOZE I HOPE YOU DIDN'T THINK YOU WERE GOING TO WIN WITH THAT VERSE. YOU STRUCTURE WAS GOOD BUT YOU LACKED PUNCHES AND PERSONAL. STEP IT UP DUN.RETURN THA FAVOR:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122706

VOTE=LOCKZ

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE