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Old 05-13-04, 09:03 PM   #10
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my vote goes to Lyrical Havok becuae his verse was better

havok......better punches......................didnt really like your structure and it kinda made your flow a little bit choppy and hard to read.............you had a good personal in there and that was prolly what wun it for you

MC..............structure wasnt good.............threw off your flow jus like Havoks..............you deffinly need some work on your punches and personals........you need to reword your shit so it hits harder and is more effective