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Old 05-13-04, 09:29 PM   #10
HELLonEARTH
Hell Ain't Got Nothing On Me
 
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Shit, my rhyme’s will make your vision blurred~in~red, but yours is so much like…the “first word~I~said“, ok opener
Like I said I’ma kill you get yo’ blood and spill~it, but your hits are like the oxygen I breath, I can’t feel~it, WEak
All that verse deserves is fifty~yawns, but mine’ll make you feel like you fell off, but you were never really~on, Ok punch
When I beat him, he’ll go into an audio~rage, cuz i’ma leave you wit less "options" than your audio~page, FILLLER
When you battle me dog it feels like your livin~in~hell, cuz I’ll leave your “dome ringing” like the liberty~bell, That makes no sense
this cats “garbage” but his shit ain’t fit for real~bins, I’ll eat you up dog, my dinners served, this meals~in, WEAK
the way I write these rhymes you would think I steal~grins, I’m like the grim reaper the way I deal~sins, aiight its aiight
he says all of his “intelligence” is made “artificially“, and its all stored in his mind…………..just not officially I'm so sick of Weak assed punches
He’s gon’ be so sad he’ll “throw himself away” like old photos, “put it in my album” dog you winnin is like tryna find a straight homoBAD CLOSER


You aren’t “murdering” emcees you should be ashamed-to-say-ya-name//
I cut you up 4 times like Schick razor-blades, verses tighter than when braids-are-made//MEdiocre opener
I state-the-shame that this battle is like prison abuse cause Imo reveal-the-truth//
This dude went from sounding hot to whack, what’s wrong with you?
Good point nice punch
Your “flows” went down more than Niagara Falls//
You came "soft all of a sudden" like your Viagra-stopped//Good punch
Man, you like a undercover cop on his first day cause you blown-ya-cover//
Expose-to-others that you a mosquito emcee, the way you bite//The flow got fucked up here
Fight with Mike, but our role’s reversed… you copy and pasted, and plus yo's rehearsedgood punch
Get it through your head, not even Restricted could spit a verse like that in ten-minutes
You need to grow up like a “tree”, so in your raps, I stick my Timbs-in-itWeak Closer

Tha lowdown
MC MUrder-6/10
Mike 12Ikeda-6.5/10

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