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Old 05-13-04, 10:00 PM   #9
PoLiFicK
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ok easly won by nelly he ripped valor

valor-2 simple of vocab your flow was good but add sum creatvity 2 go along wit it

bestline-u aint dope your battlin VALOR...definition is BRAVERY.....
after you loose this battle you will fall victim to SLAVERY.....(

ok line

worsteline-alot

overall yo verse gets a 7/10

nelly

bestline-

Yur names valor but u aint bold or brave, (defenition of Valor)
i could hear doper shit echo from a cave/

nice

worsteline-none

winner-nelly won easly wit out a doubt
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